Sunday, 6 October 2013


This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 42; the forty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "COLOR"

*this is a 55 fiction. .. 55 words exactly*


SHE: Where you going?
HE: Dadar
SHE: Virar. I have a date. I am so nervous. Do you like my black dress?
HE: Black is my favourite color.

The train stopped.

He got up, pulled out a white cane and stumbled his way out. His words echoed in her ears "Black is my favourite color."

The fellow Blog-a-Tonics who took part in this Blog-a-Ton and links to their respective posts can be checked here. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. Participation Count: 02


  1. 55 kickass. :) I can just see you evolve, Springy! The best part about this piece is that it's short and delivers that unexpected twist almost instantly. Loved it.

  2. Tnx rishita. Nice seeing u here after a long time. :)

  3. ohhhh !!!!!! hmmmm ... really good, im just imagining the look on her face

  4. speechless...rightly said...this is a kickass

  5. what a twist!! nice 55 fiction :)

  6. Short and Nice Springy! Keep writing for BAT. Good luck!

    Request: Kindly disable word verification and enable moderation :)

    Someone is Special

  7. Well written :) The twist was nice.

  8. once again reminded that 55 fictions are the best....great thngs come in small packets..!!!

    All the best

    My entry for BAT: Yamini Meduri-Color..!!!

  9. @little princess and @yamini : thnk you and all the best for BAT :)

  10. I wanna try this genre someday. Some may say its easy to write a post with only 5 words, but it sure is a challenge to squeeze in a story in merely 55.

    Well written


  11. 55er! Nice. Time for her to focus on the date now.

  12. Yup. Lol. N imagine shes on a blind date and this guy turns out to be her date. A perfect 'blind' date. ;)

  13. Shreyansh, mind blowing stuff man!
    Great work. Keep up.

  14. 55 mindblowing words Shreyansh. I hope she recovers from the shock well enough to carry on with her date ;)
    Good luck for BAT :)

  15. 55 Fictions are one of my all time favorite reads. Beautifully scripted. :D


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