Sunday, 6 October 2013

BLACK

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 42; the forty-second edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "COLOR"


*this is a 55 fiction. .. 55 words exactly*
Courtesy: http://armaanokidoli.blogspot.in/2011/05/1.html

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SHE: Where you going?
HE: Dadar
SHE: Virar. I have a date. I am so nervous. Do you like my black dress?
HE: Black is my favourite color.

 The train stopped.

 He got up, pulled out a white cane and stumbled his way out. His words echoed in her ears "Black is my favourite color."
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25 comments:

  1. Rishita Sumeet6 October 2013 at 02:38

    55 kickass. :) I can just see you evolve, Springy! The best part about this piece is that it's short and delivers that unexpected twist almost instantly. Loved it.

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  2. Unknown6 October 2013 at 02:53

    Tnx rishita. Nice seeing u here after a long time. :)

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  3. Menachery6 October 2013 at 10:12

    ohhhh !!!!!! hmmmm ... really good, im just imagining the look on her face

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  4. Unknown6 October 2013 at 11:44

    Thank you :)

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  5. the factfiction6 October 2013 at 21:53

    Shreyansh...am speechless...rightly said...this is a kickass

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    1. Unknown8 October 2013 at 02:15

      Thank you. This is my first try at 55 fiction

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  6. RJ6 October 2013 at 23:33

    what a twist!! nice 55 fiction :)

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  7. Someone is Special7 October 2013 at 01:48

    Short and Nice Springy! Keep writing for BAT. Good luck!

    Request: Kindly disable word verification and enable moderation :)

    Someone is Special

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  8. Vinay Leo R.7 October 2013 at 10:48

    Well written :) The twist was nice.

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  9. the little princess8 October 2013 at 10:47

    wow!! speechless!!

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  10. Yamini Meduri9 October 2013 at 23:16

    once again reminded that 55 fictions are the best....great thngs come in small packets..!!!

    All the best

    My entry for BAT: Yamini Meduri-Color..!!!

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  11. Unknown9 October 2013 at 23:41

    @little princess and @yamini : thnk you and all the best for BAT :)

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  12. CRD12 October 2013 at 00:19

    I wanna try this genre someday. Some may say its easy to write a post with only 5 words, but it sure is a challenge to squeeze in a story in merely 55.

    Well written

    Cheers
    CRD

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    1. Unknown12 October 2013 at 01:33

      Thanks... n try this for sure. Its fun :)

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  13. Kshitij KK Khurana12 October 2013 at 00:36

    55er! Nice. Time for her to focus on the date now.

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  14. Unknown12 October 2013 at 03:16

    Yup. Lol. N imagine shes on a blind date and this guy turns out to be her date. A perfect 'blind' date. ;)

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  15. Unknown12 October 2013 at 12:31

    Shreyansh, mind blowing stuff man!
    Great work. Keep up.

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  16. N.S.Kirti12 October 2013 at 22:44

    55 mindblowing words Shreyansh. I hope she recovers from the shock well enough to carry on with her date ;)
    Good luck for BAT :)

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  17. Unknown13 October 2013 at 04:12

    55 Fictions are one of my all time favorite reads. Beautifully scripted. :D

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