This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 40; the fortieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "MAKE A WISH"
On his knees, holding
a sparkling metallic piece, Sameer knew it was the end. But it was
irresistible. Greed had taken over. He knew that one wish cost one life of his
clan. He was the last one remaining. He had everything but still, he wanted
more. He couldn't stop himself. He touched the metal, kissed it and made the wish. He fell down,
dead; blood gushing out of his mouth.
***
As the police placed the corpse on the stretcher, something caught
the attention of Inspector Vikram. It was a metal piece, soaked in blood. He
picked it up and wiped the blood off it. Something was engraved on it. He
looked closer. It read “MAKE A WISH”. He slipped the metal in his
pocket discreetly.
Someone in the 'Dark World' smiled
playfully.
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I loved this dark tale!! Well narrated!
ReplyDeleteThanks Aditi :)
ReplyDeleteVery well done .. keep in up Shreyansh .. All the Best for BAT
ReplyDeleteMy Attempt - Vikas Khair - Wishes
Thank you vikas. And all the best to you too :)
ReplyDeletechilling tale... narrated so well!!
ReplyDeleteThank you little princess :)
ReplyDeleteGreat work!!
ReplyDeleteUthra Suresh- If only wishes were horses
Very well narrated
ReplyDelete@ Uthra suresh and Dilip Patel : Thank you :)
ReplyDeletevery well written :)
ReplyDeleteAll The Best for BAT :)
Thnx rythm. N wish u the same. Infact ur post is one of my fav BAT40 entry :)
DeleteChilling, short and crisp. Very well narrated. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ayushi :)
Deleteoh! some supernatural thing,short and scary
ReplyDeleteHehe. Yes. We all fear the 'unknown'... I wrote a longer version with details too but then the details marred the whole creepy feel...
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